Analysis of I hope I'm her Romeo



She has the most beautiful almond-colored eyes,
The fairest and most luminous smile,
Straight, chestnut-colored hair,
A true personality,
I wouldn't trade her for the world,
I wouldn't dare miss the universe over her,
She makes me happy,
She makes me cry,
She reminds me you must fight for love,
She has obtained my delicate heart,
If I may be Romeo, I could only pray she may be my Juliet.
An inspiring, everlasting romance.


Scheme ABCDEFDGHIJK
Poetic Form
Metre 110110010101 010011001 11101 010100 11010101 11011010100 11110 1111 101111111 110111001 11111011101111110 101001001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 437
Words 85
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 333
Words per stanza (avg) 74

About this poem

The title says it all, I hope that in this love story, I can be her Knight in Shining Armor, her King Arthur, her everything.

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Submitted by aprivera1432 on May 03, 2022

Modified on March 21, 2023

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Antonius

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