Analysis of Empty fist



I heard that my heart
was the size of my fist

So, I swung at the sky,
hit the ground
and realized there's something I missed


Scheme XA XXA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 11111 101111 111101 101 01011011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 125
Words 28
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 3
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 48
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

I thought about it 10 years ago I figured I might as well just put it out there.

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Written on April 08, 2022

Submitted by Ccougg on April 08, 2022

Modified on April 14, 2023

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