Analysis of Undecided

Velma Branson 1960 (corpus christi, tx)



When I see you, I like you more each day
But, then I see him what can I say

And my feelings start to go in his direction
Cause, he gives me all the attention

But, sometimes I feel misguided
So, until I know my heart is undecided

I know I should be over him
And be with you but, I still can't let him go

You know how I feel about us
But, because I still have mixed feelings

Don't hate me for still caring for him
I'm sorry my emotions collided

I know it's not fair to you
But, my heart still remains undecided


Scheme AA BB CC DX XX DC XC
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111111 111111111 011011101010 111110010 10111010 10111111010 11111101 01111111111 11111011 101111110 111111011 1101010010 1111111 111101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 514
Words 112
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 56
Words per stanza (avg) 15

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its about mixed feelings

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Written on August 10, 2004

Submitted by velmity16 on April 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Velma Branson

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