Analysis of Untilted#87

Jeremy Beacham 1979 (Tesax)



Three different faces
The same cases
Left alone as if I was dead
The memories of those three constantly replay in my mind.

Loyalty was a game to play, until it got bored.
The smiles and tears of clown are just ignored
Why me?
I wanted to give is the very best of me

What was wrong can never be right
Living in a dark day and a even a darker night.
What these three promised, they weren't willing to give
But so quick to take, my time, my heart, and my will to live.


Scheme AAXX BBCC DDXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 110010 0110 10111111 010011110001011 1001011101111 0101111101 11 110111010111 11111011 10001100100101 111101101011 11111111101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 467
Words 101
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted by jeremy_b on April 12, 2022

Modified on April 10, 2023

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