Analysis of The Fog Began to Fade



Where does this path lead
In the unknown direction, I tread
Dense and Dark, where
Deafening Silence Surrounds

Everything's engulfed in a foggy blanket
And I can see little - with my Eyes open Wide
"Where I am? Where I am?"
Twice I cried!

I waited - and Waited
Till the golden rays broke,
And little by little
The fog began to fade

I resumed my journey,
With Hopes High and Great Expectations
"For those desperate to reach destination
Will eventually find a way!"


Scheme AAXX XBXB XXXX XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 11111 000101011 1011 1001001 1001001010 011110111101 111111 111 110010 101011 010110 010111 101110 11101010 111011010 101000101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 468
Words 95
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

Those desperate to scale heights find a way even in deserted places.

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Written on April 30, 2022

Submitted by javeriayounas703 on May 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Javeria Younas

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