Analysis of What to Eat?



I don’t know what to eat
There’s plenty of food to make
This decision has me beat

We have bread, cheese, and meat
Plus snacks like chips and cake
I don’t know what to eat

Cookies? We have sheets.
And enough soda to fill a lake
This decision has me beat

Whenever hungry, I like to greet
The fridge, but then I quake
I don’t know what to eat

I have corn, potatoes and wheat
And plenty of stuff to bake
This decision has me beat

I can’t decide, meal or treat?
From the moment I am awake
I don’t know what to eat
This decision has me beat


Scheme AbA abA xbA abA abA abAA
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1101111 1010111 111101 111101 111111 10111 001101101 1010111 010101111 011111 111111 11101001 0101111 1010111 111111 10101101 111111 1010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 551
Words 116
Sentences 4
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 69
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

An exaggeration of what I feel like when I go to make lunch. This poem is a Villanelle.

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Written on April 28, 2022

Submitted by DStiesi on May 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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