Analysis of Her unknown Destiny



Gazing at the parallel tracks,
she reckons something in her life
That they never meet.

Quite low perhaps, they both run
In their own parallel axes.
Only the railroad binds them

Beneath, though, can never be seen.
She reckons her bond with someone
so-called bond existed virtually,

Having a glance through
a hole of the world's darkness.
little known to her, she was
bound to those bars of
homemade prison.

little known to her, she cannot
make the tracks meet
running at a low distance parting

A little unknown to the Little one
defining life is a void task,
to meet up something undesired.

Is it worthful calling her life
looking through the lens of
her family or society or is it a
so-called life that remains undefined!


Scheme XAB CXX XCX XXXDC XBX CXB ADXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 11010001 11101 1101111 0111010 100111 01111011 1100111 1110101000 10011 0110110 1011011 11111 1110 10110110 1011 101011010 0100110101 01011011 111101 1111001 101011 0100101001110 11110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 727
Words 143
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 5, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

About a girl, symbolizing a view from her window in a room to her actual life and insecurities and about having someone who can mean her a lot with a trade-off of what society and her parents might object and refuse .

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Written on May 16, 2022

Submitted by mpriyatham2000 on May 16, 2022

Modified by mpriyatham2000 on July 10, 2023

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Mudavath Priyatham Naik

Final Year UG student, Electrical Engineering, IIT Kharagpur, India. more…

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