Analysis of My Home in Jesus



My home is on a hill
In a field forever green
There I will stay
Til my Lord beckons me.

He gave for me His life
Three days later he rose from the grave
The price for me was His blood
And He so unselfishly gave

Through unnatural birth He came to us
No earthly father was there to be
The only way for God to walk with us
So His birth was through Divine Conception, you see

“Twas the only way for God to share with us
How for us He truly feels
Was to send His Son to die for us
On a cross, on a hill, in a field


Scheme XXXA XBXB CACA CXCX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 111101 0010101 1111 111101 111111 111011101 0111111 01111 1010011111 110101111 0101111111 111110101011 10101111111 1111101 111111111 101101001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 513
Words 116
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

First published on my blog on 5/24/2022. It is a dedication to my dear mother who went home on 5/26/2022.

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Written on June 24, 2022

Submitted by daniels.00921 on May 19, 2022

Modified by daniels.00921 on June 16, 2022

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