Analysis of Prisoner in paradise



Her rage is not a barrier for
him to stop talking to the girl,
Her age is not a privilege for
him to decide that girl,
Her wages are not the thing
he gets for his own savage,
Her little crispy nose is what
he deserves from the girl,
Her fears are his only eve for sadness,
Her smile is his only source of happiness,
Her eyes drowned in her lens and tears,
Her only destiny and the eyes make him
more a human than a prisoner in the paradise!


Scheme ABABCDEBFFGHI
Poetic Form
Metre 011101001 11110101 01110101 11111 0101101 1111110 01010111 101101 0111101110 01111011100 01100101 01010000111 1010101000010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 441
Words 98
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 343
Words per stanza (avg) 90

About this poem

Any relationship gets tougher when it gets one sided submissiveness or dominance, about that, and about a girl who is not at all possessive, if the guy is dominant and if the relationship doesn't hold much further, it is as if he is locked in a nice place , but cannot make a move.

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MUDAVATH PRIYATHAM NAIK

Final Year UG student, Electrical Engineering, IIT Kharagpur, India. more…

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