Analysis of My sufferings



The grievance and burdens
in my life are too heavy and it’s hard
For me to carry on, l prefer death to
take me slowly.

I’m cased, trapped,
 punished without a reason
So many battles I fought completely alone
and I even lost some.
Let the bitter time pass and
 the joy shall return or else death shall
take me, l can’t stand for this pain and sorrow


Scheme XXXX XXXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 010010 0111110011 11110110111 1110 111 1001010 110101101001 011011 1010110 011011111 11111111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 363
Words 78
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 7
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Written on May 03, 2017

Submitted by desmondmuzite on May 26, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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