Analysis of My Existence
A.D. Small 1987 (Indiana)
If you wipe away all the paint....
What do you see?
If the truth is very faint?
Could you exist it to be?
If you took off every layer of color.
What would you find?
Would your vision begin to blur?
Could you see into my mind?
My curves are like bars of gold.
Once uncovered they will shine!
My hands are for you to hold.
And forever be mine.
If you wiped off the dust.
And polished me to the core.
You could unbury so much lust.
That would leave you breathless for more.
After you examine my beauty.
And look deep into my soul.
You hold the key to unlock me.
Just turn it to make me whole.
I am truely with you forever.
And even past this lifetime.
You can write my name in leather.
Or curse me without a lifeline.
A.D. Small
June 7, 2022
Scheme | ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH BIBI CXCF XX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11101101 1111 1011101 1101111 111110010110 1111 11100111 1110111 1111111 1010111 1111111 001011 111101 0101101 111111 11111011 101010110 0110111 11011011 1111111 11111010 010111 11111010 1110101 11 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 759 |
Words | 183 |
Sentences | 27 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2 |
Lines Amount | 26 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 80 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 21 |
About this poem
This is dedicated to my wonderful man that has been by my side for 22 years...
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Written on June 07, 2022
Submitted by amberp.35129 on June 07, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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