Analysis of A Violet's Deity
she will shatter my mortal body,
drag me to the most daunting heights with her crooked tongue.
cruelly, she withdraws her guidance up the peak,
and i am left to sputter, writhing and clawing with need.
i trust her, surrendering myself to the reassuring guidance of her dainty hand.
i wither away fully, head hot as i draw nearer to each little death.
i love her wholly as she forces my weak frame over the edge, as the suffocating depth warps and twists my form in ecstasy and pain, and she is merciful.
so loving in her nature, yet so intoxicatingly ruthless.
| Scheme | ABCDEFGH |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 111011010 1110110110101 10101010101 01111101001011 11001001100101010101 1100110111111011101 110101110111100110100110111010001011100 110001011110 |
| Characters | 567 |
| Words | 109 |
| Sentences | 6 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 8 |
| Lines Amount | 8 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 56 |
| Words per line (avg) | 13 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 444 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 102 |
About this poem
This poem depicts my first queer relationship, raw and unobstructed in its vulnerability and newness. It describes my first experience
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Written on June 06, 2021
Submitted by atljaelyn on May 31, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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