Analysis of Forever with you

Cybil Flores 1998 (Dumaguete)



I love you,
in the ever changing petals of roses
with all the thorns unclipped and raw
as violets not only bloom in its best blue but even if it tarnish and soon wither.
I still, and will always be in every poem I lay say love has always been even the most jagged shape of you.


Scheme ABCDA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Cinquain  (20%)
Metre 111 00101010110 1101101 11001101011111011100110 110111010010111111110011111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 277
Words 59
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 217
Words per stanza (avg) 57
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Written on June 26, 2022

Submitted by apingloveb on May 26, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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