Analysis of KARMIC DEBT



KARMIC DEBT
Can it be convenient for everyone to get there rewards immediately after there actions to people , animals and objects

Associates of corrupted minds always find a small talk to locate each other through friends or enemies

If it was great to meet you, why do I end up doing too much than my mentor which leads me to this shame and generational regret and trauma

Even if you’d explain the indepth of my actions to me I’ll still insist I want to take away the poverty that suck my families blood

How will I explain to you that I have been heart broken in the past because of the things I cant afford in the hood

Even though I make acquire all this gemstone just to have enough flowers at my disposal

If you need to understand human thinking you can join me on this voyage of karmic debt

What is the actual definition of human theft

Remember when I use to come out with flying colors in college but this greediness urge never left

I never believed in loosing anything you don’t work for because I saw everyone working night shift

Most times I ask myself strange question when am drunk with my crossed hands on bartender's shelve

Doesn’t feel like the karma was real because I harvest where I never sow

illegitimately money flowing mood for many years like Pablo

Even my graduation certificate was posted to my mail box, I think every man has a price even the ruler commando

Did I forget to remind myself that life is beautiful with wine , girls , sex and bank cards

May be I was doing for my family but I wasn’t achieving any major thing due to the curses following the rulers

Now am in a big depth with my friend’s capital who believe am no more into same act of carelessness

Even though I changed, my karma still follow me on because I can hardly pay my homelessness

Suicide wouldn’t be an option but I have emancipated myself from mental stress

my karmic debt was so brave enough to reveal my talent dress

It is better to walk alone than to walk with a lot of crowd that are clueless


Scheme AX X X X X X A B B X X X C C X X D D E E D
Poetic Form
Metre 11 111010110111010100010110110100010 0100101011101111110111100 11111111111110111111111110010001010 10110101111011110111110101001111001 11101111111110001011011101001 10111010111111011011010 111101101011111110111 1101000101101 010111111110100101111101 110010101011110111101011 111111101111111111 111010110111011101 1101011101110 101010010011011111110011011001001 110110111111001111011 111110111001110101010111010100010 11001111110010111101111100 101111101101101111011100 1011110111010011101 111111011011101 11101101111101111110
Characters 2,041
Words 406
Sentences 1
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 73
Words per line (avg) 17
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

I wrote this poem about my years in higher institution what most people went through inorder to pay their bills , buy clothes , show off , have girls attention, avoid going home , pay school fee , afford luxury apartments, having good grades and traveling out of the country.

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Written on May 17, 2020

Submitted by Brandedjorsh on May 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Brandedjorsh

Graduate student of political science Education, born into the family of 4 boys and 1 girl all grown up . Parent alive , currently lives and work in UAE country. Passionate about poems, education, learning process , politics, news and rumors more…

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