Analysis of Beat the unholy
Can you hear it? My mind racing, it's everywhere, but where I am lately,
I try to control it. A part of me stolen, can't seem to catch it, for it keeps going and going, making me feel like I've lost it!
What am I feeling, what do I want, what am I going for, what have I lost. Pain surrounds me, trying to be happy, but the agony beholds me, and abruptly stops me!
Suffocating and controlling, I lose sight of things, my body becomes anxious, taken over me. Trying to control, my very being, yet sucked into a hole, of desperation!
Stop, just stop it already, I've taken so much, and feel so empty. Leave it alone, let me forget, make it easier, is my only request!
Yet still haunted, controlled and taken, when will it end, when will I stop hurting. I'm holding on, but just barely, I'm trying my best, to beat the unholy!
| Scheme | A X A X X A |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 11111110110111110 111011011110111111111001010111111 111101111111101111110111011101010011001011 10000101111111001101010110101110101101011010 111101011011011101101110111100111001 11100101011111111101101111011011110010 |
| Characters | 829 |
| Words | 168 |
| Sentences | 11 |
| Stanzas | 6 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 6 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 103 |
| Words per line (avg) | 27 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 103 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 27 |
About this poem
Ive struggled alot with my mothers death and depresstion and this is a poem i wrote about the struggles and hurt and pain i deal with still.after 10 years of her gone
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Written on June 23, 2022
Submitted by Cantoncassandra1990 on June 23, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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