Analysis of Eliquiscius



A geologist discovered a lock of hair hidden beneath a rock.
Sap fell onto her hand as she pulled it out of the bushes.
Emerald volcanic rocks merged from beneath it.
Sorrowful winds blew and an angel appeared before her and said, read the photon code in the hair under your microscope for your DNA will match it and you have been brought here under devine timing.
When she recognised the codes as matching a beam of light with her dna code upon it shon, it shon down from heaven and lit up an ancient canyon tree leading her footsteps into a completely fulfilled forest where all extinct animals existed. The angel said entering here is only permitted on this, your final moment of life for you alone have protected this area with your scientific solutions but you must leave your body here forever.
She cried suddenly in shock as she felt her soul leaving her body instantly behind and she entered the heavenly forest and became lost in its glory forever.
The angels head began to surround the forest and its eyes watched her soul pass by. Then as if she had been there before, she walked straight towards the oldest tree, and lay on its root where she rested in peace.


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Poetic Form
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Characters 1,172
Words 219
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 135
Words per line (avg) 30
Letters per stanza (avg) 945
Words per stanza (avg) 213
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Written on June 28, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on June 28, 2022

Modified by HeatherLydiaThornhill on July 04, 2022

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

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