Analysis of Better

Hasan Johnson 1980 (Peoria Illinois)



Dying but can't Die
Living but can't live
Praying for help with no help to give
Wondering why
What a waste of time
To be this miserable should be a crime
Last on the list
Put on the back burner
No boiling or simmering
Not even getting warmer
Hate my life but don't know how to make it better


Scheme ABCADDEFGFF
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 10111 101111111 1001 10111 11110001101 1101 110110 1101100 1101010 111111111110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 292
Words 60
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 230
Words per stanza (avg) 59

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At a crossroads in my life

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Written on July 03, 2022

Submitted by HasanM.Johnson on July 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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