Analysis of I cried into your eyes.



When i saw you I cried into you
You were in an audience of thousands new
I cried into you when my voice was blue
Because you were my soul mate rare and true

I cried because your eyes were as mine
I cried because I saw the devine
I cried into you like tears of wine
From a waterfall universal in time

Like water leaving earth and sky
Leaking out to places on high
I cried so hard when I saw your eyes
I cried into you my soul in disguise
And you brightened me so that I could rise

Then water poured from my eyes
As you disappeared into a sea of lies
And I can't find you no matter how I try
Because I am drowning in goodbyes.


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Poetic Form
Metre 111111011 10011001101 1101111111 0110111101 110111011 110111001 110111111 101001001 11010101 10111011 111111111 1101111001 0110111111 1101111 1101010111 01111110111 01111001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 628
Words 135
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Written on July 04, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on July 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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