Analysis of Mrs. Delphine Jackson III: Twice the Luck

Steven Bowman 1997 (Voorhees Township, NJ)



Welcoming back from vacation,
Hunter welcomed herself home.
She told him thanks for reaction,
He knew she happily welcomed.

As the night came they stayed up,
Then they prayed, pleads for child.
Hopes for a child; this sex is for us,
Prays their child will be worthwhile.

The next morning came all happily,
She awoken with a piercing scream.
The pain was too much unbearably,
As she awoken, thinking it's a dream.

They went to the hospital so painful,
As the doctors tried to make pushes.
Just pain for her was so unbearable,
She popped out a boy and girl twins.


Scheme AXAX XXXX BCBC DXDX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 10011010 1010011 11111010 11110010 1011111 111111 110111111 1111111 011011100 1110101 011110100 11110101 111010110 101011110 1110110100 11101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 564
Words 119
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

This poem is from 2015.

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Written on 2015

Submitted by stevenbowman319 on July 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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