Analysis of Cremate Me



And when I am blank,
Lay me in a place where my soul can sway.
Lay me on my babies chest,
So I can hear the prayers they say.
Lay me near their hearts so they can feel my presence when they lay.


Scheme ABCBB
Poetic Form Cinquain  (40%)
Metre 01111 1100111111 1111101 11110111 111111111110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 194
Words 47
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 147
Words per stanza (avg) 43

About this poem

When i am gone I just want my children to plant me in a garden. I dont like highways, I dont like deep water, and I dont like being in the air. I just want to be where they are !!

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Written on July 20, 2022

Submitted by Dorrissaluckett on July 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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