Analysis of My forever girl



When you first kissed me you drew me in,
At first it was scary and uneasy.
I promised myself never to fall in love again,
But with only a whisper....you began to break me.
When i looked into yours eyes i saw my dream,
My eternity,my final missing peice.
That simple look brings me to my knees,
My thoughts,my beleif in us will never cease.


Scheme ABCBDBEF
Poetic Form
Metre 111111110 1111100010 110110110101 11100101111 11101111111 1110101 110111111 111011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 339
Words 75
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 261
Words per stanza (avg) 65

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For my love stacy

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Written on June 15, 2022

Submitted by dragonsrock48 on July 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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