Analysis of Perfect moment
Do not wait for the perfect time
Do not wait for the better moment
Take the time and make it perfect
Take the moment and make it better
When you keep waiting for the perfect time
When you keep looking forward to the perfect moment
You will surely keep waiting
But when you take the moment and turn it around the first time and you failed
That's a proof you're trying.
Mistakes are proof you're trying
When you keep trying
You'll get the perfect a d best time all by yourself without waiting and that's by hardwork
The time is the inevitable progression into the future
With the passing of present and past events
Time waits for nobody
Tides is like a sea level which changes direction any time any moment
Tides wait for no man
It's like working into or walking out of a river
By drifting with the tide,and anchoring when it becomes adverse
It's better we all work at either a bad time or an average moment
By so doing we'll all get the perfect moment
A man who works tirelessly and a man who sleeps in his house during the rainy season
After the rainy season is gone the last man who thinks that,this the best to start working
Unlike the hardworking man who worked tirelessly
The lazy man then planted his crop lazily which grew bad
The hardworking man then sleeps and eats in his house enjoying the fruit of his labor because he worked,he wasn't concerned if the rain wrenched him or not,he took the time and made it perfect
Unlike the lazy man who was waiting for the perfect time but the perfect time turned out to be bad
So take your time and make it perfect!!!!!!
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Metre | 11110011 111101010 10101101 101001110 1111010011 1111010100110 1110110 111101001101011011 101110 0111110 11110 110010111110101100111 01100100001001010 10101100101 1111 11101101100101011010 11111 11100111011010 110101100110101 1101111100111110010 111011100110 0111100001110111001010 100101011011111011110 01010111100 010111011100111 0101110101101001111001111001101111110101101 0101011110100111001111111 111101101 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,601 |
Words | 317 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 5, 3, 3, 4, 5, 4 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 45 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 179 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 42 |
About this poem
All about life and time
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Written on July 31, 2022
Submitted by Im1815911 on July 31, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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