Analysis of Unknown

Mayoosi 1984 (Dehli)



Khudko khud mein
Dhoondta hun mein.
Lagta he kahin
Lapata hun me.
Muddatein guzreeeen khudko
Na mila  hun mein.
Dil ki ye shikayat he
 kyun dhadakta hu mein.
He yaaron ki mehfil saji
Magar tanha hun mein.
So gaye sare khwab bhi
Par jaga hun mein.
Karke khudko aseer
Ban gaya saza hun mein.
Jo theher gayi ho
Esi fiza hun mein.
Thandi wadiyon me bhi
Tapta sehra hun mein.
Jispar nahi koi padao
Esa rasta hun mein.
Jo kat jaye isharon se bhi
Wesi ziraa hun mein.
Shiwa karun kisse jab
Khud hi gilaa hun mein.
Hosh ataa nahin shayad
Mar gaya hun mein.
Karlun kese khudko hayat
Kya khuda hun mein.
Naummeedon ke hisaar mein
Kesa ghira hun mein.
Fateh na kar saka jo
Esa qila hun mein.
Jab toot gayi he aas to
Kyun khada hun mein.
Kar zakhmi khudko apna
Hareef ban betha hun mein.
Besharmon ke bazar mein
Kyun kahun haya hun mein.
Karke khali pemana phir
Dil bhara bhara hun mein.
Bujhakar shammay-e-ummeed
Phir "shamsi" jala hun mein.


Scheme AAABCABADAEAFAEAEAGAEAHAGAGAAADAGAAAAAFAGA
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111 111 111 111 1111 11111 1111 11111 10111 11111 1111 111 11111 1111 1111 1111 1111 1111 1111 111111 1111 10111 11111 1111 1111 1111 1111 1111 1111 101111 1111 111111 1111 1111 11111 11011 11111 1111 11111 1111 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 954
Words 206
Sentences 22
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 42
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 730
Words per stanza (avg) 175

About this poem

When someone in depressed

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Written on July 22, 2019

Submitted by Hasanabbas1472a on July 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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