Analysis of NO LOOPH***, WHATSOEVER! THANKS HIZBI SERAYE SREYA! NO ONE CAN UNSTRAIGHTEN IT, LETALONE !!



When it comes
to avoiding
any mistakes

in any walks
in any walk

already trailed
me
a seemless lesson
how to make no mistake

my older brothers
are untrackable
untrickable
unmistakable
tackwise
tactful

owing to their greatest manner
or whom care

impossible
to catch the beauty

before them
before them
I, have had
nature's (coincidence)
keep
of the beauty
without her knowledge

for a reason more stranger than her

nature somehow confer

I donot know how

I donot know how to
return her
untouched

for I respect them above
their conclusive lesson

what shall I tell them

for I am devoid of
any reason

to quieten
my soul

for fear I might quieten before them,

They are closer
closer to me
than her
than ever

They are closer
to her
than me

when it comes
to closing
ways
because
my sole error
fetching her - her way
more than ever.

They are closer
more than her
more than ever
discussing
the matter

All I know
it was war time
it was peace time
it was what is in the middle,
could
a solution
slip
from a blue's trip
from close
from far
I can tell
noone
nothing
will sleep
will settle
before them
AS my respect is overdue!

They are closer
than
what really, really
matters.

Let the enemy be the enemy!
whereas
the closer ones
let them
let them  not  MATTER,
let them be
let them be not  MATTER,
let them be not what insistently really matter/ed/s.


Scheme Abx xx xcdx efffaf gx fc HHxxicx g g x jgx kd h kd df h Gcgg Ggc AbxxgxG GgGbg xllfxdmmxxfxbifHj Gxce cxxhgcgx
Poetic Form
Metre 111 1010 1001 0101 0101 0101 1 0110 111101 11010 11 1 0100 1 10 10111010 111 0100 11010 011 011 111 100100 1 1010 01010 101011010 10101 1111 11111 010 01 1101101 101010 11111 111011 1010 11 11 11111011 1110 1011 10 110 1110 10 11 111 110 1 01 1110 10001 1110 1110 110 1110 010 010 111 1111 1111 11110010 1 0010 1 1011 11 11 111 1 10 11 110 011 11011101 1110 1 11010 10 1010010100 01 0101 11 11110 111 111110 111110100101011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,376
Words 292
Sentences 6
Stanzas 23
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 4, 6, 2, 2, 7, 1, 1, 1, 3, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 4, 3, 7, 5, 17, 4, 8
Lines Amount 88
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 46
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

Dedicated to My type = From SERAYE who has been under MODERN SLAVERY from the AKELEGUZAY + TIGRAY

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Written on August 30, 2022

Submitted by temesgen on August 30, 2022

Modified by temesgen on August 30, 2022

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