Analysis of Black life without Dad



Dad, if you were here today...

If you were here today, you would definitely be interested.
 Many important decisions are pending without you.
 Despite everything, life has become dependent rather than self-reliant.
 You can't tell anyone what's in your heart and you can't stop it.
 A boy who has done something with his own mind and is not forward and without turning because his father is not there.
 And a disciplined boy if he behaves according to other people's mind.. but in this his own mind is flying, no one will know that there is a fight of mind and those who know do not want to know..

No ears left to listen..!
 I have the right to understand..!

Today I really know your worth papa..

yours
                                                        Er. Ganesh (Tinu)


Scheme X XXXXXA XX X XA
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 1101011110001100 10010010110011 011011010101011010 11110101101111 01111101111011100011001110111 001001110101011010110111111011111110111011111111 111110 1101101 0111011110 1 011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 883
Words 144
Sentences 13
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 2, 1, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 26

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Infinity loves on Dad.. I miss my dad in my every new achievements..

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Written on July 22, 2022

Submitted by g.a.patil1000 on August 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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