Analysis of I wish I was her
She lost the guy for whom someone is dying!
She lost the guy for whom someone is crying.
Love was not in my fate,
And I hate to know that I am so late.
The story is of 2018,
Then they were really teen
You got the most handsome guy ever.
Sister why didn't you keep him forever?
He was good with looks good with deeds
Just lil immature to understand your needs.
He never blamed you after you left,
And you really think he was hard to accept?
When for the first time I loved him I hated you,
Thinking that creatures like you are really few.
Today's it's about 3yrs passed by,
Still I am not able to call him my.
It's about 3:00 am and the night is not short,
Just like that night when he was with me in my thoughts.
I thought he removed you ,
until when I found your photos few.
Trust me u lost the guy ,
For whom I daily cry..
You are damn lucky to have such a boy ,
And I really crave for the moment you enjoyed.
I love him to the end of the world
Yet not that much to erase u from his world
I did everything to keep him with me
Even though your thoughts never made him free.
Scheme | AABBCDEEFFGHIIJJKLIIJJMNOOPP |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101111110 1101111110 111011 0111111111 01011 110101 110110110 10110111010 11111111 110110111 110111011 01101111101 110111111101 10110111101 01101111 1111101111 1011001111 111111111011 111011 01111111 111101 111101 1111011101 011011010101 111101101 11111011111 111011111 1011110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,096 |
Words | 245 |
Sentences | 15 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 28 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 822 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 224 |
About this poem
About my ex and his ex
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