Analysis of My crush



she comes online because of me
goes offline when I'm busy
chat me up when I'm free
keeps me online til 12
then who is she?

still she never calls
never gotten a missed call
is she a blessing or disguised?

how beautiful
she is so beautiful
they say beauty is in the eyes of it's beholder right?

if I was the beholder I would give my eyes to everyone in the world just to see her beauty

no matter how I or she takes it
it's what they call love
because I love her... she is the dearest to me... withstanding all

hope we fight through this


Scheme AAAXA XBX CCX A XXB X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 111110 111111 1111 1111 11101 1010011 11010101 1100 111100 11101001110101 111001011111110001111010 110111111 11111 0111011010110101 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 549
Words 124
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 3, 1, 3, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 69
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

It's all about my crush. A girl I admire, I wish I am better than now so I can give her alot

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Written on August 21, 2022

Submitted by Ebeniza09 on August 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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