Analysis of The monsoon days

Ashwin Sharma 2000 (Sikkim)



The monsoon days

The cold and wet, weather of monsoon,
says all the rain that is passing by my window.
All the rain droplets, that comes contact with the ground.
The birds, the animals,get comfort in a monsoon day.
The monsoon is like cherry in a cake,
That's make the weather on earth look like captivating.
How beautiful is  the rain in monsoon,
In the ocean, in the narrow streets of town,
It passes and make a way through a drain.
The thunderclaps behind the clouds,
the wonderful shiny rain drops that fall on the ground.
The green leaves of the  trees,
they felt, today rain drops as a new.
And suddenly, after the rain shall stop,
A wondrous light will fill.
And when the sun comes out,
I hope the sun shines bright,
It will be a lovely sights.

By Ashwin sharma


Scheme X AXBXXXAXXXBXXXXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 0011 010110101 110111101110 10110111101 01011000011 0011110001 110101111100 1100101001 00100010111 1100101101 010101 0100101111101 011101 110111101 0100100111 010111 010111 110111 1110101 1110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 791
Words 164
Sentences 10
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 18, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 199
Words per stanza (avg) 48

About this poem

This is about the monsoon rainy days what we actually do in these days how rain can play a important role in our life is based on that.

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Written on August 31, 2022

Submitted by ashwinsharma156 on August 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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