Analysis of Visvas

Pooja thakur 2004 (Hamirpur)



Maan kr apna bta di sb bate usko.  Pyr krti thi vo ldki jisko...
Usne sunkr uski bate sbko btai. Kuch logo ne ghr mein shikayt lgai..
Tut si gyi vo ldki ,ye soch krr . Ki akhir ku isne sbse meri chugli lgai .
Mn mst si ldki vo, Ab shmi si rehne lgi. Dil ki bate kisi se na kehne lgi ...
Roti thi vo akeli Andheri rato mein,aksr jikr krti thi us ldke ka apni baton mein ...
Thi itni buri kya vo ldki . Jo us ldke ne uska visvas toda . Dosti pyr se uss ldki ka mn Moda.  
Jan na chahti h vo ldki , ki kya bigada tha ldke Maine tera . Jo tune visvas toda mera ..jo tune visvas toda mera ...
          


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Characters 600
Words 129
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 61
Words per line (avg) 19
Letters per stanza (avg) 426
Words per stanza (avg) 131

About this poem

Ldki ka visvas todne prr ldki k mn k kuch svd. Uss ldke k liye

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Written on November 02, 2004

Submitted by puju558 on August 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Pooja thakur

From a middle class family. 17 years old. Beleive in Krma and shree krishn bhkt. more…

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