Analysis of Kyviv Truck Driver

Opiyo Oundo 1982 (Kenya)



Vroom!broom! Truck blast off; tables, beds amid barriers it speeds off
 Hush tones, grumpy faces, brooding passengers ;the truck crawls on
To sit up, to listen, the creepy sirens, the air-raid terrors;'that's not my world'
Vrooming the engine, one giggle of joy;quick in a flash, truck lifted to basements
 Fear, terror, huddles and whispers; passengers gather together
Vroom! Broom! New lanes, bombed lanes; the driver giggles on
Hard on gas, kindergarten bag on back; belly, knees, dusty with dust
 A siren goes on, a wheel goes missing; a suckle for a sleep

Vroom!Broom! No more kindergarten mornings,a sandwich in cold, three wheels on ;the driver giggles on
New day, new joy; driver songbirds the alphabets-freezing passengers too, need hope
Shelling after shells, vroom turns kaboom; terror and dust, peepholes the shelter
 From debris and rubble, the driver resurrects ; a wailing face, another wheel lost
 'What a journey!' a dusty grin, a suckle for a sleep.

Vroom!Broom! Morning of smoke; from shelter to shelters, from Kyiv lanes to Kharkiv lanes
 Cold and freezing, the driver drives on; wondering in confusion; 'passengers asleep , snowed on road-side? '
The world and its bombshells; all this noise , the driver, finds weird
 A grin, a giggle with alphabets; a hope to the passengers
 Sirens and sirens, gunshots  and bombshells ; in between luggage and boots, the driver is hard on gas
 Third wheel goes missing; a suckle for a sleep

Vroom! Broom! Morning is hope; a newborn screams, driver halt in haste
 A look at passengers, a glimpse at a bundle of joy; the driver giggles on - 'hope is bomblessy'
 Kaboom! Kaboom! The last wheel crumbles, the shelter crumbles, the driver crumbles
Covering the truck, tiny hands gripping the wheel; the last grin is intact
The bundle of joy cries, assurance to driver; the truck will vroom on


Scheme XAXBCAXD AXCXD XXXXXD XBXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 111110101100111 111010101000111 111110010100111111 101011011001110110 1101001010010010 111111010101 1111001111011011 0101101110010101 11110011001111010101 11111010110100111 10101110110011010 1010100101010101011 10100101010101 11011110110111111 1010010111000010100011111 0101111101011 01010110110100 1001010100110010101111 11110010101 111011010110101 01110001101011010101111 0101011100101001010 100011011001011101 01011101011001111
Characters 1,861
Words 325
Sentences 16
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 5, 6, 5
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 60
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 360
Words per stanza (avg) 77

About this poem

A 2022 poem about traumas of bombings and hope that time heals all wounds.

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Written on March 01, 2022

Submitted by OpiyoOundo on September 12, 2022

Modified by OpiyoOundo on September 12, 2022

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