Analysis of RAE, SUNSHINE SPRAY

SYLVESTER LOBO 1955 (Karntaka)



Tiny, cute Rae, sunshine spray
So angelic, in sleep beatific
Your cries, they do pry
My feelings, unknown inklings!

Eyes so intense, no pretense
Skin so tender, gestures plunder
My heart and soul and all
To heaven and beyond!

Joy to behold, coy to calls
Gift of God, beauty pod
Niagara veteran, Islands return
Latest arrival in Lobo clan!


Scheme XXXA AXXX AXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101111 110011 11111 110011 1101101 11101010 110101 110001 1101111 111101 0101001001 100100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 343
Words 63
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

This poem is dedicated to my first grand-daughter, Raelynn Esther Lobo, who is just 70 days old

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Written on August 31, 2022

Submitted on September 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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SYLVESTER LOBO

Born on 26th November 1955, I am a Permanent Deacon of the Bombay Archdiocese. I was a professional journalist for nearly 20 years. more…

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