Analysis of In My Shoes



In life have you ever had to walk in my shoes…
To have to continue to walk without sharing our views…
Of life in a nutshell so to speak..
It makes life dim to bleak…
All we did was our best to give you wings to fly…
But that wasn’t good enough and I don’t know why…
You had it so easy and didn’t even care..
To respond to your children except when you wanted to be there..
The ones in charge allowed it and now I know the whole…
So, take off them old shoes and take up my sole…
I’m sure you will see you missed the two best things that ever happened to you..
It also comes as a pair of shoes in two…


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFF
Poetic Form
Metre 011110111011 111010110110101 11001111 111111 1111101111111 11110101111 11111001101 1011110011110111 0101011011101 11111101111 111111101111101011 11011011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 623
Words 131
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 452
Words per stanza (avg) 127
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Written on September 30, 2022

Submitted by rutht.27223 on September 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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