Analysis of Bones

Manahil 2022 (Islamabad)



Breaking fragile
Bones,
Trying to control
Irrational hormones

Heart I take out
From bloody water;
Hoped to purify it,
But instead it
Was subjected to
Slaughter

Hair runs wild,
I struggle to break free
Of beauty standards;
Chains I can't
Escape from,
My vision conveniently
Blurs

Breaking fragile
Bones,
I swim in a deep
Sea, full of things that
Are unknown

My mind whirs and
Causes chaos
Everywhere like a
Cyclone,
I continue
Breaking my own
Heart and fragile
Bones


Scheme ABxb xcddec xfxxxfx ABxxg xxxgegaB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (60%)
Etheree  (33%)
Metre 1010 1 10101 01001 1111 11010 11101 1011 10101 10 111 110111 11010 111 011 1100100 1 1010 1 11001 11111 101 1110 1010 1010 01 1010 1011 1010 1
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 474
Words 97
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 7, 5, 8
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

A poem about emotions that overwhelm you and trap you in cages you can't escape.

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Written on April 11, 2022

Submitted by manahilkhanyz on September 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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