Analysis of Breakups



'Twas the end of the day,
the beginning of summer
the in between of things
lost forever

Hope fell quietly
Surrendering to his will
Closing her eyes
diving into abyss

mountains rose high
separating the two
one walked away
Into the doom

Rivers down the way
Collected the other
she drifted dead
till the end of summer


Scheme ABXB XXXX XXAX ABXB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 101101 0010110 000111 1010 11100 0100111 1001 100101 1011 10001 1101 0101 10101 010010 1101 101110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 325
Words 67
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

The poem circles around the departure of two lovers where one is hopeful fot new love while the other feels like the world has ended for her.

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Written on September 15, 2022

Submitted by Megs12121 on September 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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