Analysis of Love Declared

Francis Thompson 1859 (City of Preston, Lancashire) – 1907 (London)



I looked, she drooped, and neither spake, and cold,
We stood, how unlike all forecasted thought
Of that desir-ed minute! Then I leaned
Doubting; whereat she lifted--oh, brave eyes
Unfrighted:--forward like a wind-blown flame
Came bosom and mouth to mine!
That falling kiss
Touching long-laid expectance, all went up
Suddenly into passion; yea, the night
Caught, blazed, and wrapt us round in vibrant fire.

Time's beating wing subsided, and the winds
Caught up their breathing, and the world's great pulse
Stayed in mid-throb, and the wild train of life
Reeled by, and left us stranded on a hush.
This moment is a statue unto Love
Carved from a fair white silence.
Lo, he stands
Within us--are we not one now, one, one roof,
His roof, and the partition of weak flesh
Gone down before him, and no more, for ever?--
Stands like a bird new-lit, and as he lit,
Poised in our quiet being; only, only
Within our shaken hearts the air of passion,
Cleft by his sudden coming, eddies still
And whirs round his enchanted movelessness.

A film of trance between two stirrings! Lo,
It bursts; yet dream's snapped links cling round the limbs
Of waking: like a running evening stream
Which no man hears, or sees, or knows to run,
(Glazed with dim quiet), save that there the moon
Is shattered to a creamy flicker of flame,
Our eyes' sweet trouble were hid, save that the love
Trembles a little on their impassioned calms.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111010101 111011101 1101110111 101110111 11010111 1100111 1101 10111111 1000110101 11011101010 1101010001 1111000111 1011001111 1101110101 110101101 1101110 111 01111111111 1100010111 11011011110 1101110111 101010101010 011010101110 1111010101 01110101 0111011101 1111111101 1101010101 1111111111 1111011101 11010101011 101110011101 1010110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,381
Words 250
Sentences 10
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 15, 8
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 364
Words per stanza (avg) 82
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:15 min read
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Francis Thompson

The Rt Rev Francis William Banahene Thompson was Bishop of Accra from 1983 to 1996. more…

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