Analysis of Dear Sister



The day has approached
The day of immense joy and mirth
I consider- your life must have coached,
The most vital values that worth.

You swiftly put an end to fifteen
Hasting towards the way of life-
I know, you live with most eager keen,
To face any challenges of rife.

I am lucky enough, I have you
You accompanied me side by side,
Now you’re grown too- life seems new
But, grow enthusiasm – make life a good ride.

Remember, duties now added on you-
On swiftly taking a new chapter of life,
Never mess your plans- you should glue
I bet, you’ll enjoy the vibes of such type.

I am wishing you a belated happy birthday,
Despite it being late, it worth
With enormous concern and love; I pay-
This is your hero – who’ll see you soon in forth.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF EDEX GBGX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 01101 01101101 101011111 01101011 110111101 10010111 111111101 111010011 111001111 101001111 1111111 11010011011 0101011011 11010011011 10111111 1110101111 111010010101 01110111 1010010111 11110111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 767
Words 161
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

This poem is solely dedicated to my sister, moreover I dedicated this poem to her in her 16th birthday. This assists me to unfold the path of more like friendship with my sister..

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Submitted by acharjaramesh on September 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ramesh Acharja.

I am from Bhutan pursuing my studies at one of the school in class 11. more…

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