Analysis of Desolate girl
Beaten and battered
She ran through the tracks
Running towards the light
She saw ahead of her
Her light was a disaster
Her whole world was coming to an end like a falling roller coaster
Her pains increased
As she thought of she had being through
She was born innocent but was forced to become evil
She was hated right from the day she came into the world of the living
She was born among people who despised weaklings
And to them she was another weaklings
An obstacle that prevented them from progressing
Staring at her reflection in the water
She looked at her eyes, the source of her pain
They were dead and lacked every form of life
These black eyes that represented nothing but agony
She screamed in anger
As tears streamed down her cheeks
She bit her lips while remembering her promise
She would never cry
Smiling at her reflection
She remembered how she once believed
That being nice would get her people's love
But she forgot something
She didn't live in a normal world
She lived in a world where demons dwelt in moving bodies
All she ever wanted was to be loved
But what she got in return
Was nothing but hatred
She cried as the rain began to drizzle
Reminding her of her pains
She remembered the times she spent crying
Wishing there was someone to comfort her
Only to find out that she was alone in this world of hers
And she made up her mind
To run her race as a lonely girl
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10010 11101 100101 110110 0110010 01111011110101010 0101 111111101 11110011110110 111011011101011010 11101101011 011110101 1100101011010 10100100010 1110101101 10101100111 1111010101100 11010 111101 110110100010 11101 1010010 101011101 1101110101 110110 110100101 11001110101010 1110101111 1111001 110110 1110101110 0100101 1010011110 101111100 101111110101110 011101 110110101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,391 |
Words | 268 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 7, 8, 6, 3, 7 |
Lines Amount | 37 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 187 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 44 |
About this poem
This poem is all about the life of a lonely girl.
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Written on June 20, 2022
Submitted by itzbuttercupprincess on September 01, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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