Analysis of My womp



I don't want this pain in my womb
hovering at night
He talks to me about what I was before
He won't dock with me on any date
Crawling around me or around my mind I don't know!
I say it's a ghost
I say I don't think about it.. I'll open the window
But it does not fly pain!
He digs into the wall of my room and hides in it
He invites me to join him
I forget that it came from my womb.
I remember one day I loved a ghost as much.
Doesn't leave scars on my body
In fact, I can't find anything
Except for the ants in the morning.
I'm fascinated by what he's doing there
I guess he's showing me a way to go
But where? in the wall!
As if he knows me
My doctor says; All pain in the womb
He is a man who does not know how to return.


Scheme ABCDEFEGHIAJKLLMENKAO
Poetic Form
Metre 11111011 10011 11110111101 111111101 1001110111111 11101 11111011110010 111111 1101011110101 1011111 101111111 101011110111 10111110 0111110 011010010 1100111101 1111010111 11001 11111 110111001 110111111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 725
Words 166
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 543
Words per stanza (avg) 160

About this poem

It's Arabic poem but I have translated it into english.

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Written on August 28, 2022

Submitted by Tinahamed567 on September 01, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Zahraa hamed

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