Analysis of When the night is coming



-When the night is coming-

Sometimes we live another life and live in our minds to fight. With pain and desert in this world, who would have helped me I don't know. I'd like to see the greatest places I wouldn't know any bad cases. To have the sadness in this world, it's me yeah...heh...my sinking boat.
 When the night is coming, the world becomes too dark.
When the night is coming I'd like to live in other parts of life.
To see the best time in this wasteland, I want you know that all...this world is just the basic placement you know that all you know...                                                       We start the living in this world with every piece of mind, to start the living in your mind you have to count to nine. You know these numbers that of course you know it all, I know. But who can know what is this world and mind you don't know all.
When the night is coming, the world becomes too dark.
When the night is coming I'd like to live in other parts of life.
To see the best time in this wasteland, I want you know that all...this world is just the basic placement you know that all you know...                                             Let's count to nine together, yes. I'll be with you for ages, but then I'll leave you on your own and you will go to mages. I'm like a captain of my boat, I'll sink of course in mind. To have the better life to grow I don't have strength and right
When the night is coming, the world becomes too dark.
When the night is coming, I'd like to live in other parts of life. To see the best time in this wasteland I want you know that all..this world is just the basic placement, you want that all I know...


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Characters 1,671
Words 324
Sentences 24
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 9
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 119
Words per line (avg) 41
Letters per stanza (avg) 594
Words per stanza (avg) 205

About this poem

It was pouring out of me, my soul, heart. It's sorrow, sadness, worrying about future, and looking for happiness. I wanted to do a song with it, will see)))

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Submitted by artembartosuk on September 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Artem Bartosh

Hello, my name is Artem. I'm a 15 years old teenager from Ukraine, Lutsk. I started to write poems some weeks ago and want to share this poem with all of you. I have some more maybe I'll post it later. more…

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