Analysis of Da best butter naan my mom



I wear a mask with a smile for hours at a time
Stare at the ceiling while I hold back what's on my mind
And when they ask me how I'm doing, I say, "I'm just fine"
And when they ask me how I'm doing, I say, "I'm just fine"
But the fact is
I can never get off of my mattress
And all that they can ask is
"Why are you so sad, kid?" (Why are you so sad, kid?)

BEACUSE MY MOMMA LEFT MEEEEE like the naan and the chiken and the butter and chese pls help me il drownin

I'm drowning, let me breathe
I'm drowning, let me breathe
I'm drowning, let me breathe
I'm drowning, let me breathe

I'm better off all by myself
Though I'm feeling kinda empty without somebody else
Oh, I hear you crying out for help
But you never showed for me when I was ringing your cellphone
Oh, you don't know how it feels to be alone
Baby, oh, I'll make you know, I'll make you know, oh

MY MOMMA CAME BACKK LES GO


Scheme xxAAbxbx a CCCC xxxdde e
Poetic Form
Metre 1101101110101 1101011111111 01111111011111 01111111011111 1011 1110111110 0111111 111111111111 11101110100100100111111 110111 110111 110111 110111 1101111 1110101001101 111110111 111011111110110 11111111101 101111111111 1101111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 886
Words 190
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 1, 4, 6, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 132
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

its da best like naan and chikens and butter chese i luv my chicky and muma

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Written on October 09, 2022

Submitted by Nanmaismymom on October 09, 2022

Modified on April 03, 2023

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