Analysis of My friend

Jenny cogar 1953 (Webster)



As my friend
Lyes dying
Her breath
Shallow whisps

I can't help but think
Bout the things
Wed wish

Our children
To be closer
Lives not so hard
Taking time to
Live not to exist

Our loves
Never to
Leave us
Going to
Heavenly bliss.


Scheme XXXA XAX XXXBX ABABA
Poetic Form
Metre 111 110 01 101 11111 101 11 1010 1110 1111 1011 11101 101 101 11 101 1001
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 233
Words 51
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 5, 5
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 11
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 11

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A dying friend

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Written on October 18, 2022

Submitted by cogarvirginia on October 18, 2022

Modified on May 02, 2023

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