Analysis of The Sensors Are Wrong



They keep picking up limestone
When I'm surrounded by gems.
I'm floating in space
And they tell me I'm facing north.
How do I get back to land?
I'm running out of oxygen
And I can barely see my spaceship.
The answer should be simple,
But I don't want to solve it.

God, I love space.
I love the peaceful nothingness
And the stars.
Why am I out here?
I should have a rope.
Did I forget,
Or did I leave it behind?

My sensors are wrong
And I think that it's my fault.
Because I took a hammer to them
And never bothered to fix it.


Scheme XXAXXXXXB AXXXXXX XXXB
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 111011 1101011 11001 01111101 1111111 11011100 01110111 0101110 1111111 1111 11010100 001 11111 11101 1101 1111101 11011 0111111 011101011 01010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 534
Words 124
Sentences 12
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 7, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 133
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted by DaisyMMontgomery on October 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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