Analysis of Mama Bear

John David Walsh 2001 (Boston)



What business do kids have in war?
Why dont more take on the chore
To shield young minds of our mess
Not enough care to address

A female soldier, men will doubt
Whispers of weakness were passed about
But in one act of ruthlessness
No quicker way was a rumor dismissed

In a flurry of blood and hair,
Not only foes, but friends watched in despair,
All we could do was stand and stare
Dont fuck with mama bear


Scheme AABB CCXX DDDD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 11011101 1111101 11111101 101111 0110111 101100101 10111100 1101101001 00101101 1101111001 11111101 111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 409
Words 85
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 26

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Written on October 20, 2022

Submitted by John_David_Walsh on October 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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