Analysis of Share It With Me



In the mist of this dark situation locked away, incarcerated you are my ray of hope. My inspiration, my clouds of joy the lift, and gift of my life. The high; your more than dope.  With your love I am motivated, elated Spirit elevated with so many situations I can cope. I go in prayer imprisoned in a community confessions of sin, begging God will  bless us again and open the doors; not only to the institution, free me from this prison I'm drowning in. Struggling skin affliction admissions of a wretched man. Pray he open your eyes to my deepest love. The realization/recognition you are my prism. My Crown Jewel a diamond in my mind. The apple of eye, un-mined gold a solid confidant, my road warrior; pack and strap up. Embark on this journey with me, as we act like it's a short ride. I just gotta know that you're prepared for me. While I'm gone would you still care for me; if I fall busted dusted down on my luck would you still be there for me?
If you could/would you answer the questions, no second guessing! Then I know. God's got a place in Heaven for me. Love me right, and in return bewilder you. Showered gifts, trips,  pack up the whip passport ready flight plan. Don't be late, don't wanna miss the ship. I wanna gaze in eyes as we cruise the Caribbean. Cast away ecstasy for you babe as my word I do keep; my Love deep as my pain are you ready to SHARE It With Me.


Scheme AA
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 001111010101010011111110101111010111101111111111100010101001110010111110101000010001011101111010100111010010111110110010010100101010111101111101010100101111011100100110101111101010111001011011110111111101111101110111111111111111101011111111111 11111100101101011111010101111100010101101111011101111111010111010111100100101100111111111111111111011111
Characters 1,385
Words 265
Sentences 21
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 2
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 534
Words per line (avg) 134
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,068
Words per stanza (avg) 267

About this poem

If true love can with stand the true test of time. Life after separation that faces adversity and indifference.

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Written on October 30, 2022

Submitted by BiggCezar374# on October 30, 2022

Modified on April 15, 2023

1:21 min read
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Chittovious Coleman

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