Analysis of As i took my last breath
Oh hell encamped all around me
vicious demons i could clearly see
Enemies to the left of me i was very mad
what they were planning made me opposite to glade
As i took my last breath i called on Jesus name
Then there He was standing in my room as my head He raised
I saw angels all around Him and His spirit shone so bright
I heard Him laugh as He raised me back to life!
Michelle lee Cartaer
| Scheme | AA XX XX XX X |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 11011011 101011101 1001011111101 110101110011 111111111101 11111001111111 111010110110111 11111111111 0111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
| Characters | 396 |
| Words | 87 |
| Sentences | 2 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 9 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
| Words per line (avg) | 9 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 62 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 16 |
About this poem
i was feeling very sick and weak. i came home from the doctors and went to bed and as the poem speaks!
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Written on November 10, 2023
Submitted by michellec1967 on October 11, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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