Analysis of Before I Finally Fall Asleep



I stood naked under the shower,
feeling the chills
running through my spine.
It is too cold;
where all the warmth has gone!
I feel too small,
For this too big world.
The white plain walls are
bleeding blues all over me.
Numbness in the heart is growing heavier
at each thought passes by.
All the allys are leading
to the same old town,
forsaken and deserted;
dreams are shattered in its
narrow passage ways.
There  lays a statue,
naked and beautiful,
I want to carress it's beauty, but not today;
Now,
let me have a cup of coffee
with you my friend!
Before I finally fall asleep!


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Poetic Form
Metre 111010010 1001 10111 1111 110111 1111 11111 01111 1011101 10001110100 111101 1010110 10111 0100010 111001 10101 1101 100100 11111101101 1 11101110 1111 011100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 586
Words 130
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 452
Words per stanza (avg) 109

About this poem

It's a poem about depression,it talks about the lack of warmth,and loneliness felt by a person.

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Written on October 09, 2022

Submitted by jilsjpj on October 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jils P V

JPJ (pen name) Doing graduation in central University of Punjab VPO Gudda,bathinda, Punjab 151401 more…

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