Analysis of Myosotis Arvensis ( Field Forget-me-not )



Just as the flowers’ petals of pale, dusty blue
Bring this unwelcome thought to mind, which they might not
To yours; so do your eyes, of much sterner hue
But more timid look, beg me so: Forget-me-not?

As you glance to me again, your knitted brow
Signalling such tumult and a desperate scrabble
For the scattered facts within; shows me how
Despite your best intentions, your memories are rubble

And all our shared lives have burned out, to ashes.
Cricket, backgammon and too much wine
Fallen, not forgotten, like your tears from eyelashes
Tight shut by newly wrinkled lids, like fruit withered on the vine.

Your head nods uncertainly, unlike the flowers in the breeze,
No seeds or words to sow or say, just a deep unease.

© Michael Westcombe 2008


Scheme ABAB CDCD XEXE FF X
Poetic Form
Metre 110101011101 110101111111 11111111101 111011110111 11111011101 100110001010 1010101111 01110101100110 011011111110 10100111 101010111110 111101011110101 111010001010001 1111111110101 101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 752
Words 140
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

This is about a very good friend of mind, who suffered early onset Alzheimer's, and passed away too soon after that.

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Written on 2008

Submitted by on October 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Michael Westcombe

Born Durban 1953. School and some university there. Moved to England June 1974. Two male children. more…

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