Analysis of Piercing gaze



Piercing gaze embodying woe,

Lackéd moment of ecstasy

here below. Your skyward vision

breaks beyond towards the deep, and

shakes the beloved one from sleep.

You take on the burden of which

we caused—those which move stumble still

without pause. Still yet do you make

the light-bright shine upon the wounds.

Beckoning beyond back to Womb


Scheme X X X X X X X X X X
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Metre 10101001 11101100 10111010 10101010 1001111 11101011 11111101 01111111 01110101 10001111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 355
Words 74
Sentences 5
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 27
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Written on October 19, 2022

Submitted by brendansullivan1998 on October 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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