Analysis of STUCK IN

Areeba Fayaz 2006 (Khyber pakhtun khwa Mardan)



I'm crying not because I'm tired
But because of all I am today.
Because of the state of my mind
Because of the condition of my heart.

Because of the pain that I hide behind my teeth, under my lashes and in the storeroom of my heart , that I have locked.

I locked the pain for somedays thinking it will die, because of the lack of oxygen and soon I'll be free.
But I was wrong,  I'm wrong and maybe I'll be wrong forever because that griefe and pain breaks all the locks and crack the walls of that room everytime I lock it up.

My heart starts to bleed
My mind mind starts to please
My lips starts to beg
My lashes become wet
My eyes become red.

In the darkness of the room, I lay like a sculpture made of griefe.
Talking to my lord begging for relief.


Scheme XXXX X XX XXXXX AA
Poetic Form
Metre 110101110 101111101 01101111 0110010111 0110111101111011000011111111 1101111011101101110001111 11111101011101001110111010101111101111 11111 111111 11111 110011 11011 0010101111010111 1011110101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 763
Words 163
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 1, 2, 5, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

This poem is written by Areeba Fayaz. It is about the emotions and feelings of those who are stuck in the dark phase of their lives .

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Written on October 12, 2022

Submitted by tubaareeba410 on October 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Areeba Fayaz

The poem "STUCK IN" is written by Areeba fayaz. It's the first poem that I have written at the age of 16. I'm studying right now in class 9th in Presentation Convent School. more…

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