Analysis of Blood



Blood on the tracks
Blood on the mace
Blood on red roses
Blood that seeps into cracks-
and every vice.

Blood that is fake
Blood, is it poisoned?
Blood for the patient

Blood for the anointed

Bloody red crosses
Blood dried-on forgotten verses
Blood sealed countless cases
And soiled the runny nose on some punched in faces.

Blood and sacrifices
Pooled between 2 curtains
Blood in a circle
At a roman circus

Blood shaped in a pentagram
Drips from his thorned face,
Of He who was & is Sacred-
His blood is forgiveness.

Blood too often forgotten.

Blood that saves
And saved just in case
DNA exonerates after two decades
Blood money for each day
Sometimes it’s too late
 Cuz the Blood can’t wait while you spill it in haste.

Their hands remain stained

Illy begotten & framed.

Cleansed till it’s rotten.
Spilt till it’s pure.

Musing your heart out
Believing in love again for her
Even though to bleed, it hurts.
It’s nice to feel, again.
Like this time it had worth
No blood lost
Like a random coin toss.
Blood if it’s heads
It’s tails, but still bled.

Blood on a handshake
Or a skewered white whale.
Well that’s a lot of blood for one page.
Oh please it won’t sell-

By, Miles J Feulner


Scheme ABCAX DXX E CFFF CXXG XBEG H XBXXXX X X HX XIXXXXXXX DXXX I
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 1101 11110 111011 01001 1111 11110 11010 110010 10110 11101010 111010 010101111010 10100 10110 10010 101010 11001 11111 1111110 111010 1110010 111 01101 1101010101 110111 01111 10111111101 11011 10101 11110 1111 10111 010010110 1011111 111101 111111 111 101011 1111 11111 1101 101011 110111111 11111 11110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,262
Words 255
Sentences 16
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 1, 4, 4, 4, 1, 6, 1, 1, 2, 9, 4, 1
Lines Amount 46
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

A confrontation with our humanness, contrasting triumphs and pitfalls using the word ‘blood’ as a theme. Starts out confrontational and I hope ends with the reader feeling whimsical and hopeful; as well as a hug.

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Written on November 19, 2022

Submitted by j.milesf1921 on November 22, 2022

Modified on April 02, 2023

1:16 min read
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Miles J Feulner

Resident of Salt Lake City, Utah. Life long writer currently developing a pilot for tv and an album of original songs. I’m a lover of history and art. more…

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